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Thursday, 13 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey - Day #5 Activity 1


For this activity I had to write a short story (8-10 sentences) about what might happen next. I had to pretend if I was in a forest and I was lost.


It was late at night when My Friends Were Nowhere to be seen, When I realized that I had walked away from my camp site. I tried Shouting For Help but I heard nothing But Crickets and other bug but after a few Minutes I started to Hear voices calling my name so I Followed where the Noises where coming From At the End I found myself on a unforgiving mountain.....
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4 comments:

  1. Eric15 July 2017 at 13:05

    Hi Florence,
    I really like your story, it is sounds really great. IT makes want to read more. Well Done!
    Eric

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  2. Ohhsen18 July 2017 at 15:40

    Hi Florence. I like your story. I like how it ended. Remember to double check your work, for any spelling or punctuation errors. Keep on working hard.

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  3. daniel18 July 2017 at 16:39

    Hello Florence
    Good job writing this story. Maybe you could make it a bit longer next time. The ending is pretty good though. Keep up the excellent work Florence.

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  4. aminiasi22 July 2017 at 16:45

    Hello Florence, your story sounds great. Maybe you could of made it a little bit longer. Remember to use correct punctuation. Keep on working hard.

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