L.I to turn a boring piece of writing into a interesting detailed piece of writing. I learnt how to Show and not tell. When you tell someone a text/opinion it will sound boring and if you Show a text/opinion then it will sound interesting and detailed. This week for our must do we had to make a Show and tell Descriptive writing D.L.O. On the D.L.O was a picture of what we had to Show and tell. The photo was a man walking his daughter into the crystal blue ocean. Also their were 2 text boxes that had Show and tell written on them. For tell we had to write a boring description of what the photo looks like and for the Show we had to write a detailed and interesting description of what the photo looked like.
I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
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Tuesday, 26 June 2018
Show and Tell | Descriptive Writing
L.I to turn a boring piece of writing into a interesting detailed piece of writing. I learnt how to Show and not tell. When you tell someone a text/opinion it will sound boring and if you Show a text/opinion then it will sound interesting and detailed. This week for our must do we had to make a Show and tell Descriptive writing D.L.O. On the D.L.O was a picture of what we had to Show and tell. The photo was a man walking his daughter into the crystal blue ocean. Also their were 2 text boxes that had Show and tell written on them. For tell we had to write a boring description of what the photo looks like and for the Show we had to write a detailed and interesting description of what the photo looked like.
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