Narrative Planner

L.I To write a narrative in 40 minutes.
This week for writing we had to write a narrative in 40 minutes. We had arange of photos to write a narrative about. I chose the photo with a girl at a baseball game. My Narrative is about a girl who gets embarrased for running around the square when the game hadn't started. But then her friends has an Idea, IT WORKED. We had 40 minutes to write this because it was a test for the real test that we are having next term. Next term I am hoping to get a score then I did at the start of the year.

Narrative

Link to Narrative  This week for writing we had to write a narrative about a lost family camp out. My narrative was about kids getting lost because the parent walked off without noticing that the kids were being distracted by a rare NZ Bird. The kids then started to look around for their parents but then had to sit out one night. The next morning they saw 2 figures and the figures ran towards the kids and found out that the figures were the parents. We had to write a short narrative, So basically a narrative that we would be able to write in a test (40 minutes) So that was what is was about and what we had to do.

Structure and language of a Narrative

I learnt what the structure of a narrative was and I know what the language of a narrative is. The structure is TOPES - T - Title, O - Orientation, P - Problem,E - Events and S- Solution. In the orientation you must include the 5 Ws and a hook, In the events you must include what happen and in the solution you must include a description of the final outcome. We had to make a D.L.O explaining the structure and languae of a narrative and how it reminds us about how to write a narrative.