Narrative

                                                       Title : The Midnight Monster.

         

Beginning - Going into the basement.

“Bang! Bang! Bang!”Jack and Jill went down into the basement to see what the noise was and Jack said “We haven’t been down here ever in our lives”

Jill said “Ok just because we haven’t been here before it can’t be that scary... can it?”

“You can Say that again” said Jack rolling his eyes.

Jack and Jill walked around the basement and then they saw something like a black figure rush fastly past their eyes.

“H-h-hey Jack Do you know what that was?” said Jill

Jack  said  

“Um…. N-n-nope not really?”

“What do you think that was then?” Said Jill still being afraid.

The Monster.

Jack and Jill walked closer to the black figure. Jack and Jill were scared to go closer but then the Black figure turned out to be a big and black monster and it went closer to Jack and Jill. Jack and Jill went backwards slowly then the monster walked closer and closer then Jack said

“ JILL RUN!!!! Right now!!!”Jack And Jill Ran as fast as they could.

But Suddenly Jack tripped over a toy that was left on the ground and the monster ran to Jack.

No!!!!”,Jill's scream was so loud that the monster had ran somewhere that Jill couldn’t see it anymore.

Jill ran to Jack and started to cry her first drop of tear had landed on him and Jill said “JACK!!” You're alive.

Comes Back To Life

Then Jack said

“What happened?” Then Jill said

“Long Story!” Then Jack said

“Ok I am getting a bit bored now how about we go upstairs and - as soon as Jack could say anything else Jill said something.

“I kinda wanna stay in the basement for a little bit. Jack said

“Um…. are you sure it is kinda getting late and it has been a long time and I think we should go to bed” Yea I guess you're right” Said Jill. Then they went back upstairs and went to bed.

But more did they know the Monster didn’t like mean kids so the Monster had to get it’s REVENGE!!!!

L.I to proofread and edit.I learnt to write a narrative with a few paragraph in it.I learnt it by doing a similar story as what I did in my Narrative Planning.I had to write something that was similar to My Narrative Story but not the same thing.