For this task I had to research a famous New Zealander, and find out about them. Then I had to create a DLO and say Where was they born, Why are they famous and two interesting facts.
This is a nice and vibrant DLO about Lorde! I didn't know that she didn't finish year thirteen at school! She probably decided she'd rather pursue her signing career which makes sense considering she has been so successful!
Hi Florence. I really like your DLO. The facts you have provided are interesting. Like Eric said I think you should change the layout, to make it look better. Keep up the great work.
Hello Florence I didn't know most of the facts about Lorde (I actually have never heard about her until now). All of the facts are great. Keep up the amazing work. Daniel
Hello Florence, you have found some really interesting facts about Lorde. I dodn't know that Lorde was born in Takapuna. Keep up the remarkable work Florence.
Hi Florence,
ReplyDeleteI like that picked lord. But you should change the layout so you make the writings bigger. Well Done!
Eric
Hey Florence!
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice and vibrant DLO about Lorde! I didn't know that she didn't finish year thirteen at school! She probably decided she'd rather pursue her signing career which makes sense considering she has been so successful!
Nice job!
Nicky :)
Hi Florence. I really like your DLO. The facts you have provided are interesting. Like Eric said I think you should change the layout, to make it look better. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHello Florence
ReplyDeleteI didn't know most of the facts about Lorde (I actually have never heard about her until now). All of the facts are great. Keep up the amazing work.
Daniel
Hello Florence, you have found some really interesting facts about Lorde. I dodn't know that Lorde was born in Takapuna. Keep up the remarkable work Florence.
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