Paragraph structure

• LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.
• LI: to evaluate writing samples using the PBS writing rubric.
• LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.

This week for writing we had to read a messed up recount.  The recount was really messed up. Each group had to work on a paragraph and re write it. The Dr seuss group was control of the 3rd Paragraph. Right above is the messed up recount. It was written by Mr Wong. We were learning about Paragraph structure. We had to read the paragraph and fix it up. When I mean fix it up we had to re write the whole paragraph. Down below is the fixed recount that I wrote. I wrote it while I was reading the messed up recount. I have changed the colour of the text for the re written recount so that you know that it is the fixed Recount.