Sky tower recount test

This week for writing Mr Wong's writing groups got to write a recount about the sky tower trip. We had 40 minutes to complete the recount. Before we did that we did a recap on what the structure, language, order and tense was for a recount. In our recount we had to include TREE: Title, Reveal, Events and Ending. After writing our recounts Mr Wong went over with us about having a look at the writing rubric and to pick a reasonable score. When Mr Wong called us he ask if anyone would want him to look at their recount to check if the score they gave them selves was reasonable. He did that to a couple of people including me. He would go on suggesting mode and write comments of some mistakes we made in our recount.