Show and Tell | Descriptive Writing

L.I to turn a boring piece of writing into a interesting detailed piece of writing. I learnt how to Show and not tell. When you tell someone a text/opinion it will sound boring and if you Show a text/opinion then it will sound interesting and detailed. This week for our must do we had to make a Show and tell Descriptive writing D.L.O. On the D.L.O was a picture of what we had to Show and tell. The photo was a man walking his daughter into the crystal blue ocean. Also their were 2 text boxes that had Show and tell written on them. For tell we had to write a boring description of what the photo looks like and for the Show we had to write a detailed and interesting description of what the photo looked like.