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Monday, 18 December 2017

Day 1 SLJ Activity 2


SLJ Day 1 Activity 2
For this activity I had to write a letter to my friend saying how I would feel if I was voyaging on a waka/canoe. We had to write how we would feel if we were on the boat/waka/Canoe. Here is my letter.

Hello my friend I am pretty nervous, the water is rough and also a lot of big waves I am always wet. I am wet and cold I can't stand the rain and thunder storms. A lot of people are in this boat I am very Crowded. Every where I look their is always just water/sea/ocean. Suddenly I look up and see a funny looking cloud. Few seconds later I look back up and the cloud is getting bigger and closer then I realize it is not a cloud, but actually the land. I jump with joy because all my wishes have come true. Now I can finally be warm and dry and get off this boring stinky boat.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Florence,

    Ruby here from the Summer Learning Journey team :)

    Wow! What a great letter! I really like how you talked about the land looking like a cloud at first. Do you know how Aotearoa got it's name? It ties in very well with your letter!

    You have picked up on some ideas that I hadn't thought about before. One of those was how they were sick of always being wet which I'm sure was true!

    Have you ever been on a boat before? I have but I always get so sea sick it's never any fun!

    Cheers,
    Ruby.

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