This week for the summer learning journey I completed day 2, activity 1. This is what we had to do for the activity On your blog, tell us how you would feel about going zip lining in Rotorua. Try to use some descriptive words (adjectives) and action words (verbs) in your post!. I'll try to add as many Adjectives and verbs as I can. Down below is my finished activity.
I would absolutely love to go zip line in Rotorua! I would like to see the amazing land they have, how clean their sea is. I think that when I'm about to go zip line I am going to be scared, but I get used to things very quickly. When Im zip lining I hope to see loads of gorgeous soaring birds. I wonder if there will be any animals that I have never seen before.
Hello Florence,
ReplyDeleteWhat an outstanding blog post from you. You are a very confident girl. I love it when I see confident people standing up and giving risks. I have not been on it, but I've been on the luge and skyline. The words that you've used is amazing. Have you been to Rotorua yet?
Nice Work!
Hello Florence! It's amazing to see where you started from. You have really out done yourself this Holiday with the programme and you should feel very happy about it. You were able to do exactly and use very descriptive words along with figurative language. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHello Florence,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put your sentences together with a mix of adjectives verbs and more. Your sentence really interest me. Anywasy Keep it up!
Kia ora Florence,
ReplyDeleteThe Summer Learning Journey is coming to an end on Friday the 25th of January at 12pm, that’s tomorrow! Don’t forget that you can get extra points by posting meaningful, thoughtful and positive comments on any other bloggers post!
Well done on creating a story using awesome adjectives, I really liked how you used ‘scared’, ‘gorgeous’ and ‘amazing’! By using describing words you are able to paint a picture in the reader's head! Have you ever been to Rotorua before? I think it is a fun place to go because you can do heaps of activities like luging.
Keep up the awesome work!
Blog you later!
Georgia E