This week for the summer learning journey I completed day 1, activity 3. This is what we had to do for the activity On your blog, write a poem that describes your feelings about travelling to Beijing, China.
I look outside only to see polluted air.
I felt like a disgrace that we didn't take care.
A lot of people have died from this air.
I wonder how it will be for me to take care of care.
Hello Florence,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for finishing this activity. It's good to see someone focusing on the SLJ activities. I love the poem that you have written. The rhyming sounds great - air and care. I have written on hop onto my blog and read it. My one is not good as your's, because your one is brilliant. Have you ever wished of visiting China?
Nice Work!
Hello Florence,
ReplyDeleteI think your sentence sounds very cool. I like sentence 2 because it is sounds majestic. Keep up the great work Florence!.
Hello Florence! I really enjoyed reading your creative poem. I loved the word disgrace in line 2 and how it really blends in with the line which makes it a great one. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteGood morning Florence!
ReplyDeleteReally interesting poem! I like how you have explained the polluted air, but then turned it around and asked the question of how we can do something to change it. That's really next level thinking, well done!
Do you like writing poetry? What do you think the good things are about China?
Keep up the great commenting! Take care,
Lee