L.I to write a 10 sentence explanation on aluminum cans.
I learnt about how aluminum cans were made. I learnt it by watching a video about what people do to make them and what the cans are made out of. For this you had to write a introduction about the aluminum cans next you had to write a explanation so steps on how the aluminum cans are made, last you had to write a conclusion so you have to explain what you basically said in the explanation but in a shorter sentence.
Great start on your explanation, Florence.
ReplyDeleteYour explanation section is well written and you have tried to stick to two sentences per paragraph.
Your introduction starts well, but what have you told the reader about how aluminium cans are made? The conclusion also starts off well, but I don't know what topic you are trying to link to.