PBS Holiday Blogging challenge - Bonus Activity Day 1
For this activity I had to recommend this ride to Someone and I recommended it to Nyjah and I also had to think of how it might be if i was going to ride it.
Hi Florence! I really like this DLO you have made for activity 3 day 1. I like the ride you have chosen and how you would think you would feel on that ride. Although I think maybe placing the image of the Stratosphere ride in the center would be a bit better so there isn't just a blank area there. Good work!
Hi Florence, I think that you should check for any spelling mistakes. I agree with Victoria with putting that image in the centre of the page. I also that you should put an attribution with the picture. In your blurb I think that you should written more about the task, and you check for spelling mistakes (for example the i like this but is meant to be like this I). Keep up the great blogging. Eric
Hi Florence! I really like this DLO you have made for activity 3 day 1. I like the ride you have chosen and how you would think you would feel on that ride. Although I think maybe placing the image of the Stratosphere ride in the center would be a bit better so there isn't just a blank area there. Good work!
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ReplyDeleteHi Florence, I think that you should check for any spelling mistakes. I agree with Victoria with putting that image in the centre of the page. I also that you should put an attribution with the picture. In your blurb I think that you should written more about the task, and you check for spelling mistakes (for example the i like this but is meant to be like this I). Keep up the great blogging.
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Hi Florence really love your blurb and your DLO. I hope you are having fun.
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