Hello Florence I seen how you have signed up for the Holiday Blogging Challenges, Good on you! You did a great job for your first activity. I like the simple layout but for the last slide it has to be How much for your family to go. Not just a family because there is not the same amount of people in a family. So when you can maybe fix it. Nice job.
Hi Florence, I liked that you have made a DLO about this task. I think you should make your blurb bigger by explaining where is Rainbow's End located and also how much would it cost for you family to go. Keep up the great blogging. Eric
Hello Florence
ReplyDeleteI like your work it is telling the readers heaps of information about rainbow's end. keep it up.
Hello Florence I seen how you have signed up for the Holiday Blogging Challenges, Good on you! You did a great job for your first activity. I like the simple layout but for the last slide it has to be How much for your family to go. Not just a family because there is not the same amount of people in a family. So when you can maybe fix it. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteHi Florence, I liked that you have made a DLO about this task. I think you should make your blurb bigger by explaining where is Rainbow's End located and also how much would it cost for you family to go. Keep up the great blogging.
ReplyDeleteEric