Replies to Comments

  

Today I have replied to some of the comments that were left from Peers or Teachers. Thank you to everyone who has commented on my blog, I'm looking forward to commenting on more peoples blogs during the last few day of the holidays.

SLJ Commenting | Comment 2

This week for the summer learning journey I have decided to do another slj comment. I commented on Ellenora's blog post. Her blogpost was about her hometown. I think she needed a bit more description on her home town. I will add in her blog link for you to view her blog.

Link - Ellenora's Blog

SLJ Comment | Comment 1

This week I have decided to do a Summer Learning Journey Comment. I have decided to comment on Alice's blog. Down below is the comment that I wrote to her. I will provide a link to her blog.

Alice's Blog

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Commenting

This week for Commenting I have decided to Comment Charlize. Her blog post was about Verb Tenses. In my comment I added A connection with her blog post, I greeted her, I gave her a compliment about her work and I gave her the "Keep Up the Great work" so that she could keep on with her learning. I really enjoyed reading what Charlize did for her writing.

Commenting

L.I To comment on a person's blogpost and give them advice on what to work on

This week for Commenting I have decided to comment on Miiana's blog post. I have commented on her types of rhyme blog post. It was about her working collaboratively in a group of four and also it was about her and her group learning about the types of rhyme. I learnt from her blogpost that the types of rhymes are Consonance, Assonance, End rhyme and Alliteration. Her group had to each choose one of the Rhymes to work on. They had to write down a summary of what they were working on. 

But what I found out that they hadn't done was to find photos of their examples from the Dr. Suess books that Mr. Wong had provided. I think that that they would have needed to put photos of they examples to show people what page/ evidence they had found. I Made a connection with her blogpost, I greeted her, I gave her a compliment about her work and I gave her the "Keep Up the Great work" so that she could keep on with her learning. I really liked reading her blog post, it was very interesting to read.

Commenting

This week I have done my Commenting. I have commented on Nyjah's Blog. Her blog post was about the weather of Auckland. It was also about this week's weather. I have written a kind full comment about her blogpost. In my comment I included a greeting, what she needed to work on, what I liked about it and also I added a connection.

Commenting

L.I to comment on someone's blog and check for any mistakes.
This week I have decided to comment on Leon's Blog. His blogpost was about what he did for inquiry. While I was reading his blurb he didn't add much information on what he did for the D.L.O. He just talked about what M.A.I.N stands for and the immediate cause. I think that he should work on talking about his D.L.O more than talking about other things that don't relate to his D.L.O. 

Commenting

This week for Commenting I have commented on Victoria's Blog. This blog post I commented on was from 1 or 2 years ago. It was a bonus activity for the holiday blogging program. I liked how she made a slide presentation on the ticket prices.

Cybersmart | Commenting

L.I To write a quality comment. This week for Cybersmart we had to write quality comments. In the comment we had to include a Greeting,Complement or connection, Question or helpful comment. I found 2 sentences that didn't make sense in her blurb. I told her to fix those mistakes in my comment. I asked her how long it took her to write that whole blurb. The point in this Cybersmart lesson was because some of our commetns that we made on peoples blogs don't make sense.

Commenting

This week I have decided to comment on Charlize's blog. Her blog post was about the story she read (In the Begging) I wrote a very long blurb explaining what I liked about the blog post,What she needed to work on and a question. I think she needed to work on doing a bigger blurb. I asked her, How long it took her to complete the whole thing.

Commenting

This week for Commenting I have commented on Nicole's Blog. Her blog post was about her Rugby inter school. I think she needed to work on putting more photos.

Commenting

This week I have decided to comment on Angelica's blog. Her blog post was about her commenting on Fau's blog post. I think that she needed to work on asking a question in her comment so that the reader can answer the question.

Commenting

This week for Commenting I have decided to comment on Fau's blog. Her blogpost was about what she did for reading which was Maui. She made a slide presentation to explain who maui is and what she learnt. I loved her blurb because it explained what she did and the process she went through to get it finished.

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This week I have decided to comment on Alayahs blog post. I really liked her blogpost because it had a long blurb. I asked her a question on how long it took to write the blog post. I thought that she needed to work on not adding boring information that no one really wants to hear. But other then that I loved her work.

Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Kaitlyns blog. I thought that she needed to work on putting less photos on her blog post because it takes up a lot of space.  Other than that I liked her blogpost.

Commenting

L.I to comment positive things about someones blog. This week I have commented on Nicole's blog. Her blogpost was about blogging about the matariki celebration she had at our school. I think she needs to work on making the photos smaller.

Commenting | Ellenora's Blog

L.I to comment positive comment on other peoples blogpost. This week I decided to comment on Ellenora's Blog. Her blogpost was about kiwi can. I said that she needed to work on her spelling because people might not understand what she is trying to say.

Commenting | Nicoles's Blog

L.I to comment positive things about someones blog. This week I have commented on Nicole's blog. Her blogpost was about her commenting on Victoria's blog. I think she needs to work on writing a bigger comment.

Commenting

L.I to comment on a person blog.
I commented on Miianas blog. On her blogpost she talked about what volume and capacity means. She explain what she did on her D.L.O. I had done a similar blog post as her on my own blog.

Commenting

This week for commenting I decided to do another reply to a comment. This week I replied to Nicole's comment. Nicole has commented on my Nervous system blogpost. In my comment I wrote a greeting,a thank you comment, a positive reply, and answered her question. Then I said Thanks for the positive Comment Nicole and said who the comment was by.