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Sunday, 6 January 2019

Day 5 | Activity 3 | SLJ | Last day of week 3

This week for the summer learning journey it is the last day of week 3. I completed day 5, activity 3. This is what I had to do for the activity On your blog, write a short story about what happened when you opened the door and walked outside after the acid rain storm. To earn full points, you must write a story that is 8 – 10 sentences long. Down below is my short story. I will be earning the full points!
I wake up from my stressful sleep, I yawn for about 5 seconds. I open up the back door only to see that all my flowers from my garden are dead. I wonder how my plants died. Did I water them yesterday? I did because I also watered the neighbours flowers. I close the door and run to the front door, what do I see, Dead trees! No animals what so ever, brown dead grass and no flowers! I wonder to myself "WHAT HAPPEN TO NATURE!" as I wondered ashes came whirling in. Why could have this happen "Everyone come out to the front door!" I yell to my family. Everyone came rushing to the front door and everyone Gasped. Everyone became shook and started to question "What Happen?" I walk out on the concrete as I step on dead leaves, I shake because of how scared I was to loose nature. I thought to myself, "What about oxygen?, You need trees to BREATHE!" I was starting to think that we were going to die! My family then walked out with me and saw no living plants, animals, nature etc.
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3 comments:

  1. Mele8 January 2019 at 14:33

    Hello Florence,

    Congratulations for finishing this activity. What an outstanding blog post. "WOW" is all I can describe your writing as. Reading this made my day, because it sounded interesting. The adjectives that you used is great. You have a lot of feelings in this story. Nice Work!

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  2. Marieta8 January 2019 at 23:21

    Hello Florence,

    I think your sentence is very intersting. I like how its a sad story. So far I really like how you are coming up with creative ideas to finish or create a story!. Keep it up!

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  3. Ellee5 February 2019 at 14:04

    Hi Florence!

    Wow what a rollercoaster ride this story is! This would be such a crazy thing to wake up to!
    I like how you opened your story too wondering how your flowers had died.

    I like the way you have described the surrounding environment in your story too, it sounds very eerie!
    How do you think you would feel walking through that?
    I can only imagine seeing areas that are so familiar to you looking one way being completely changed!
    Did you use anything for inspiration for this story?

    Great story Florence - Ka pai!

    Nga mihi,
    Ellee :)

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