I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
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Tuesday, 3 October 2017
PBS Holiday Blogging - Activity 1 Day 3
For this Activity I had to find out How much it cost for a family pass to go to kelly tarltons, How much it cost for a Child to go and How much it cost for an adult to go to Kelly tarltons.
Hi Florence, I think that you DLO looks really cool but I think that you should put the attribution smaller or don't have an attribution at all because it from the site the Daniel and Oh Hsen provided. In your DLO I think that you should check for any capital letters that are in the wrong place. In your blurb I think that you should also check for capital letter that are in the wrong place. Please make changes. Eric
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ReplyDeleteHi Florence, I think that you DLO looks really cool but I think that you should put the attribution smaller or don't have an attribution at all because it from the site the Daniel and Oh Hsen provided. In your DLO I think that you should check for any capital letters that are in the wrong place. In your blurb I think that you should also check for capital letter that are in the wrong place. Please make changes.
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