I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
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Wednesday, 4 October 2017
PBS Holiday Blogging - Activity 1 Day 5
For this Activity I had to Find out some facts about the Harbour Bridge. I found some answers from the internet. I have also put in some Photos for the people who are unsure or don't know what the Harbour Bridge is.
Hello Florence I really like the colourful attributed images you used of the Harbour Bridge they look really nice. I also like how you layed out all the questions and the answers you found right next to it. Great work
HI Florence. I think that you DLO looks amazing. I think that you should make your writing bigger because it makes us the readers be more interested, I think that in both your DLO and you blurb you need check for any capital letters that are there that not meant to be there or capital letters that are not there it is meant to be there. Please make changes. Eric
Guten Tag Florence,
ReplyDeleteI really love the way you've laid out your writing. Your images look amazing. Great Work.
Hello Florence I really like the colourful attributed images you used of the Harbour Bridge they look really nice. I also like how you layed out all the questions and the answers you found right next to it. Great work
ReplyDeleteHI Florence. I think that you DLO looks amazing. I think that you should make your writing bigger because it makes us the readers be more interested, I think that in both your DLO and you blurb you need check for any capital letters that are there that not meant to be there or capital letters that are not there it is meant to be there. Please make changes.
ReplyDeleteEric